Teaching writing: The Essentials


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    The following is premised on the understanding that you have already followed the first part of the guide to writing skills.  It’ll be harder and make less sense if you haven’t.

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    Approach 1: Product

    This is a traditional text-based approach that relies on the presentation of a model and its imitation or adaptation.  As the name suggests, it is focused on the outcomes of writing, not how the outcomes are achieved.

    The approach seeks to synthesise the components of the writing skill by focusing on each in isolation first.  So we move, e.g., from the mechanics of the alphabet and punctuation systems, through a focus on syntax and lexis including considerations of cohesion and style until we have trained our learners to combine their knowledge of each to be able to produce a coherent, effective and accurate text.  It can be visualised as an incremental system:

    product approach



    Typically, a writing lesson following this approach will start with the analysis of a model (not always a complete text), looking at how an expert writer handles, e.g., lexical chains to create cohesion in a text and then move to the creation of a parallel text by the learners in which they attempt to apply the same skill to produce their own finished text.  Typically, a series of lessons will be undertaken focusing on the elements of the system above in the same kind of way.

    Naturally, the approach has been criticised for being atomistic and focusing too narrowly on systems at the expense of the focus on skills and subskills.  It remains, however, a common approach in many coursebooks and classrooms because it allows for the content to be focused on separately from the form and structure.  In other words, it breaks down a complex skill into teachable and learnable sections, recognising that learners need to deploy a range of language knowledge to achieve the final text.

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    Approach 2: Process

    Again, as the name suggests, this approach focuses on the subskills of writing such as planning, drafting and polishing and is cyclical in nature.

    Based on research into how good writers construct texts, it breaks down the writing process into a series of repeatable stages.  First, for example, expert writers generate ideas in a random way and then evaluate each on the basis of relevance and importance.  Then, the writer will plan, draft and re-evaluate before producing a final text.  Often the process, or parts of it, is repeated until the writer is finally satisfied with the product.  It can be visualized as a process rather than an incremental system:

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    As the diagram is intended to show, the draft-evaluate-re-write part of the cycle may be frequently repeated.  Later re-writing is reduced to polishing.

    Typically, a single lesson in this approach will not include all the phases.  Learners may work on a text over a series of lessons starting with the idea-generation phase and culminating in the finished article at a (much) later date.


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    Approach 3: Genre

    This approach draws on the work of genre analysis and, like the product approach, frequently uses model texts as the subject of analysis, imitation and modification.  There, however, the similarity ends.

    This approach focuses on three fundamental aspects of all texts:

    genre approach will typically start by getting the learners to analyze a text in these terms before going on to see how the types of language used to contribute to the nature of the text (or are, rather, a product of it).

    There is more on this in the guide to the genre on this site.  Here, it will be enough to present one example. In a text intended to tell an anecdote in writing to a friend (a Recount), we will find that the text is organised in four steps:

    1. Orientation: in which the writer sets up the topic (establishes the Field)
      There’s a guy, John, I know at work who always tries a bit too hard.

    2. Record of events: in which the writer says what happened
      Yesterday he got too pushy and managed to upset a really important client.  We nearly lost the contract but the boss stepped in just in time and calmed everyone down.

    3. Reorientation: rounding up
      The client eventually saw that nothing bad was meant and said he was happy to go on using us.

    4. Coda: personal evaluation
      I hope John’s learned his lesson and will be a bit more diplomatic in the future or we’ll all be out of a job!

    This is how this might happen in the classroom (over a series of lessons, of course).

    1. The learners and teacher together read and analyse a model text like the one above and:

    2. identify the staging, as well as the structure and the language, used
    3. look at the form of the language and see if the text is particularly formal (note the use of, e.g., out of a job rather than redundant and the use of ‘!’)
    4. look at the sort of verbs that are used.  In this case, most of the verbs are material and behavioural processes (tries, got pushy, upset, lost, stepped in etc.)
    5. analyse other elements of the language (e.g., the use of circumstances such as in future, eventually, yesterday, just in time etc.) and so on.
    6. The teacher and learners work together to produce a new text, referring back to the model as they go along.

    7. The learners write their own text based on the model and the jointly constructed text.

    8. The learner(s) and the teacher discuss the text’s effectiveness and redraft it.

    9. Finally, the learners re-draft and polish their texts.

    There’s a bit more on this (applicable to both speaking and writing and concerned particularly with recounts and narratives) in the guide to the function of relating experiences.

    Graphically, the teaching-learning cycle looks a bit like this (adapted from Burns, 2001, after Hammond, 1990)

    The strength of the approach, it is claimed, is that all texts in the same genre follow the same staging and all will exhibit the same sorts of verbal processes and circumstances etc.  Once this is learned, then, the student can go on to construct, for example, conventional recouts in a variety of styles based on any set of material facts. Other genres, such as discussions, narratives, expositions, instructions, explanations, information reports etc., which will have their own characteristics, can be tackled in the same way.  Discussions, for example, will need learners to focus carefully on modality (it may be the case etc.) and on hedging (it is arguable that, many would conclude etc.) as well as on the conventional staging of such texts.

    There is a guide to teaching for and against discussion texts on this site, linked below.

    Combining Approaches

    It can readily be seen that these approaches are not mutually exclusive.  Elements of the product approach, such as the focus on structural aspects of language can form part of the process approach when students evaluate what they have written as a first draft and such a focus is legitimately part of a genre approach when the language is being analysed.

    A genre approach can also be usefully combined with a process approach or a product approach.


    References:

    Butt, D, Fahey, R, Feez, S, Spinks, S and Yallop, C, 2001, Using Functional Grammar: an explorer’s guide. Sydney: NCELTR

    Burns, A, 2001, Genre-based Approaches to Writing, in Candlin, C and Mercer, N (Eds), English Language Teaching in its Social Context. Abingdon, UK: Routledge

    Halliday, M, 1994, An introduction to functional grammar: 2nd edition. London: Edward Arnold

    Tribble C, 1997, Writing. Oxford: Oxford University Press

    Other references you may find helpful:

    Cushing Weigle, S, 2002, Assessing Writing, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press

    Harmer, J, 2004, How to Teach Writing, Harlow: Longman

    Hedge, T, 2005, Writing, Oxford: Oxford University Press

    Hughes, R, 2005, Exploring Grammar In Writing Upper Intermediate and Advanced, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press

    Hyland, K, 2003, Second Language Writing, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press

    Hyland, K, 2002, Teaching and Researching Writing, Harlow: Longman

    Kroll, B (ed.), 1990, Second Language Writing: Research Insights for the Classroom, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press

    Raimes, A, 1983, Techniques in Teaching Writing, Oxford: Oxford University Press

    Shemesh, R & Waller, S, 2000, Teaching English Spelling: A Practical Guide, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press

    Spiro, J, 2004, Creative Poetry Writing, Oxford: Oxford University Press

    White, R & Arndt, V, 1991, Process Writing, Harlow: Longman

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